Funny writing, good supernatural premise, excellent characterization. Here's a terrific quote -- the ellipses are in the original:
"See, here's the bullshit about high school, and believe me, I've had plenty of time to think about this. Teachers, parents, guidance counselors...all of them are always pushing this crap about how it's okay to be different, just be yourself. Don't give in to peer pressure, blah, blah, blah. The truth is, it's really only okay to be yourself if that self is within an accepted range of 'normal.' You like soccer instead of basketball, Johnny? Well, okay, I guess, so long as you still like sports. What's that, Susie, you want to wear the blue sweater instead of the red? You know we're all about expressing individuality here...so long as it's still a sweater."
Sadly, I think this sentiment applies to the adult world as well -- but it's harder to fight when you're young.